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He thought he was too cool for you. He actually believed that he was too amazing to be hanging around with the likes of you. Those were the exact words that left his cherry red lips.

Damn you, Strider.

So with a sniff and a loud huff, you ended your confession with a rather awkward stalk to the door, trying to slam it as loud as possible for added effect.

And you slowly walked away, waiting.

You waited for him to throw open the door with a flurry in an attempt to catch you before you were gone; not only from his peripheral vision but also his life. You waited for him to admit that he loved you and that this cool kid act was just a facade-something he put on for show. You waited for him to fling his arms around you and beg you to never walk out of his life again. You patiently waited for him to seal the deal with a passionate kiss.

You wanted him to love you. You wanted to be the girl that was always on his mind. You wanted to feel the heat from those god-like lips of his whilst the cool plastic of his shades were gently pressed against your face.

Your strides were getting shorter and shorter as worry struck you. Why hasn't he come to pull you into his arms yet?

You desperately wanted to pretend your life was some cliche romcom, in which everything was perfectly plotted and heart-wrenchingly sappy. In which the girl always got the guy no matter the menial differences between them.

But your life isn't like that.

So as you looked at the his door, praying that it would open, your feet crunched against the stale concrete of the street.

...and like a deer in headlights, you were caught.

Bye, Bye Dave Strider.


And from that window, Dave watched you walk too dangerously close to the street and proceeded to pull the door off the hinges in an attempt to save you. But alas, he was too late. He remembered see your face being illuminated by the bright light of a car, before everything was tinted red.

Oh, how he hated the color red.
Yep. I killed off Reader-chan simply because she pissed me off with her naive beliefs of cliche moments.
Sorry for this sucky oneshot. I don't know. I've just seen so many Dave Reader inserts that make Dave seem so... Lovey-dovey?
I just believe that Dave has the sense that he is better than Reader-chan and wouldn't act so cutesy with her.

Story belongs to me.
Dave belongs to you.
You belong to me. :iconflirtwinkplz:
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suicidal-wolf20 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Well then.

I guess my name kinda fits it.
Assyria888 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
More! Have the reader wake up in the hospital with Dave
Abby-the-Wolf-Spider Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
-le calming me self dowwwnnnn-
Can I write like my ideal continuation of is? :3
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah sure! I'd be so glad! ^-^ Can i read it when you finish? 
Abby-the-Wolf-Spider Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You sure can! :3
KindOfGoth Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Could there have been a warning? o-o
Xmzv Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Oh. I didn't expect that. xD Nicely done
SoccerStrider01 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
HA HA im laughing, because I actually got hit by a truck XD ROFL
ChocoTheFrog Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
I will not accept it.

Other than me being dead, this is a great story. I can't wait to read more of your stories owo
V0dk4Mutini Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well im 3 cool 5 u dave *snaps fingers in z formation*
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