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He thought he was too cool for you. He actually believed that he was too amazing to be hanging around with the likes of you. Those were the exact words that left his cherry red lips.

Damn you, Strider.

So with a sniff and a loud huff, you ended your confession with a rather awkward stalk to the door, trying to slam it as loud as possible for added effect.

And you slowly walked away, waiting.

You waited for him to throw open the door with a flurry in an attempt to catch you before you were gone; not only from his peripheral vision but also his life. You waited for him to admit that he loved you and that this cool kid act was just a facade-something he put on for show. You waited for him to fling his arms around you and beg you to never walk out of his life again. You patiently waited for him to seal the deal with a passionate kiss.

You wanted him to love you. You wanted to be the girl that was always on his mind. You wanted to feel the heat from those god-like lips of his whilst the cool plastic of his shades were gently pressed against your face.

Your strides were getting shorter and shorter as worry struck you. Why hasn't he come to pull you into his arms yet?

You desperately wanted to pretend your life was some cliche romcom, in which everything was perfectly plotted and heart-wrenchingly sappy. In which the girl always got the guy no matter the menial differences between them.

But your life isn't like that.

So as you looked at the his door, praying that it would open, your feet crunched against the stale concrete of the street.

...and like a deer in headlights, you were caught.

Bye, Bye Dave Strider.

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And from that window, Dave watched you walk too dangerously close to the street and proceeded to pull the door off the hinges in an attempt to save you. But alas, he was too late. He remembered see your face being illuminated by the bright light of a car, before everything was tinted red.

Oh, how he hated the color red.
Yep. I killed off Reader-chan simply because she pissed me off with her naive beliefs of cliche moments.
Sorry for this sucky oneshot. I don't know. I've just seen so many Dave Reader inserts that make Dave seem so... Lovey-dovey?
I just believe that Dave has the sense that he is better than Reader-chan and wouldn't act so cutesy with her.

Story belongs to me.
Dave belongs to you.
You belong to me. :iconflirtwinkplz:
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner 11 hours ago
FUUUUU. HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I DIED BECAUSE OF DAVE?
Who cares?
I DON'T KNOW, I DON'T.
Okay then...
GREAT STORY.
You're turning into a Hussie.
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MetricScenie Featured By Owner 8 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
I'm currently crying because I've finally achieved my life goal--

I have become a Hussie.

thankies for the wonderful feedback and yeah dave is a little douchebag but he's cute so that kinda makes up for it
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AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner 8 hours ago
Exactly, Dave's an adorable little shit. But, since you are now a Hussie, you will have a lot of angry fans because you killed everyone, then you're gonna fix everything and then you would have satisfied the fans. So... No happy ending? Of course, because you're a Hussie.
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showmelove435 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015
Ok that was really sa
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:iconsuicidal-wolf20:
suicidal-wolf20 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Well then.

I guess my name kinda fits it.
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Assyria888 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
More! Have the reader wake up in the hospital with Dave
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Abby-the-Wolf-Spider Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
OOOOHHHHH
HEYHEYHEHHEYHYEY
-le calming me self dowwwnnnn-
Can I write like my ideal continuation of is? :3
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:iconmetricscenie:
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah sure! I'd be so glad! ^-^ Can i read it when you finish? 
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Abby-the-Wolf-Spider Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You sure can! :3
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KindOfGoth Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Could there have been a warning? o-o
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Xmzv Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Oh. I didn't expect that. xD Nicely done
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SoccerStrider01 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
HA HA im laughing, because I actually got hit by a truck XD ROFL
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ChocoTheFrog Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
no
Nope
I will not accept it.
DAVE ALL YOU HAD TO DO WAS HUG ME. DAS ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL.

Other than me being dead, this is a great story. I can't wait to read more of your stories owo
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V0dk4Mutini Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well im 3 cool 5 u dave *snaps fingers in z formation*
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momoluvsu Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
No. No, you're really not. Please stop making me happy that the reader died.
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V0dk4Mutini Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm too cool for my dress
These shades don't leave my head
Everything you say is so irrelevant
You follow and I lead
You want to be like me
But your just a wannabe
love it or hate it
I can't help the way I am
Hope you don't misunderstand
Cause I'm too cool
Yeah I'm too cool
To know you
Don't take it personal
Don't get emotional
You know it's the truth
I'm too cool for you
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momoluvsu Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
Extended ending brought by me - 
Dave jumped up from the bed, his crimson red eyes wide, a cold sweat covering his slightly tanned skin. He looked over to the sleeping girl beside him. Oh, how peaceful (Name) looked when she slept...
Shaking his head, he laid back down, his face in just the slightest of a smile. 


( TAKE THAT. ALL YOUR LOGIC IS THROWN OUT THE WINDOW. I DON'T LIKE DYING, THEREFORE THIS HAPPENED. ) 

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Little-Ankle-Biter Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student General Artist
I laughed so hard when i saw this; thank you XD 
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canisMajor12 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
 Thank you! Reader-chan isn't dead! This comment just got you a watcher!

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:iconmomoluvsu:
momoluvsu Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
Awe, thanks? cx 
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:iconmetricscenie:
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like you. :D
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:iconmomoluvsu:
momoluvsu Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
I like your story... Just make it a dream next time. :3 
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Cookie-ChanOuO Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
THIS MADE ME HAPPY
THANK YOU RANDOM CITIZEN
/shot/
~Cookie
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momoluvsu Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
YOU ARE WELCOME. 
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TheAmazingOdyssey Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Spontaneous killing of Reader-chan...

ARE YOU HUSSIE?
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MetricScenie Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
o.o yes I am Hussie. You must obey me. I support Jade x Karkat.
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TheAmazingOdyssey Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
but but but but but but but but but but i support jade x daveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Ccry-The-Cat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013   Writer
As long as Davies ok...<3
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:iconwishiwaswinryforever:
What? What? NOOOOOOOOO!
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angrybaka Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
well, that escalated quickly!
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:iconmetricscenie:
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Im sorry :3 i'll surely be there at your funeral though! :D
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SpiritKeyMaster Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
wh-why would you do like this to meh? ;-;
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Bibi17624 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wait what what wha-
But-
Dave.. WAI. DIS IS YOUR FAULT. AUTHOR-SAN KILLED ME OFF LIKE ANDREW HUSSIE BECAUSE OF YOUR "COOLNESS" QAQ
Still awesome though~! ^-^
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MetricScenie Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry >.< *huggies*
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Hinata710 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
I was kinda surprised when I read this it it's exactly what I think dave would act like XD
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MetricScenie Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I know. I just think this is how Dave is. And Im glad you think so too!^^
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WTFAnimeReader Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Aww so sad. I would do exactly that sadly...
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Kalidrawer123 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Why am  laughing so hard at this XD.
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:iconmetricscenie:
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know....but this made me laugh :D and then i fell outta my chair and hurt my bum ;^;
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Kalidrawer123 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lol, well its funny to me.
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MegWilliams Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Awe dang good thing I'm a time lady then B] ))
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:iconmetricscenie:
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw darn it! I was really hoping you died D: LOL. JK(:
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TehSparkleCheese Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist
woah wait i belong to you how does that happen
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:iconmetricscenie:
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
AHAHA. FOOLISH MORTAL. I AM YOUR FATHER. YOU BELONG TO ME~
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TehSparkleCheese Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Student General Artist
ohhai father
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:iconmetricscenie:
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
HEEEEEYYYYY GUUURRRRRLLLL XD
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TehSparkleCheese Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student General Artist
hows my good father doin
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:iconmetricscenie:
MetricScenie Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Weeeeelllllllll, haha. I just ran a hipster sloth over with my lawnmower.... so yeah.
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TehSparkleCheese Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student General Artist
and you didn't invite me?
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AriNoAsairamu Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student General Artist
OWWWWWW
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